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Sitting On the Grass

Young man sitting next to me on the grass, I asked him, If I am depressed can you help me? I heard his voice, I will expect you to feel alive never look back go on with your life I'll bring you back home and will never leave you alone. When I am chilly young man? will you cover me with your coat protect me from thunder and rain? I will carry you under the tree shield you till the sunrises. Young man, I lost everything and I am trying to survive, will you help me? I will reason with you as some things in life are made not to last forever. Young man if I am crying as I live daily only as an image walking dead as a tool which makes me feel like a fool? I will wipe your tears embrace you, search for a way to please you and make you proud of who you are. Young man if I need a friend how will you help me? I will befriend you forever, lean towards sharing, consent to create a harmonious lovable atmosphere till you sense never be solo again. Young man if I want to kill myself as my injuries can never heal it's my soul's wounds what will you do? I will forbid you to do that, but enforce you to predict your happiness use your vigor to promote your emotions steal success and throw away failure. Acknowledge your age to improvise what is best for you, as looking backwards can have an impact on your life. Young man, I need my children I live in agony an era that seems seamless without them. Inform them to grab me away as my heart is heartless unstable. Beg them to stand by to pick up the broken pieces before it is irreparable. Will you do that for me young man? Yes, I guarantee they will rescue you before dawn. My friend young man get me off the grass, walk me to the bank, please. Arrived at the bank holding his hand she asked the teller to bring out her last 20$. This is for you to thank you for sitting on the grass with me. Young man your image will be engraved in my heart, forever. Therese Bacha 17/3/2018

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Date: 3/21/2015 5:03:00 PM
:) :) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/24/2014 11:27:00 AM
truly beautifully penned dear friend excellent piece of writing god bless smiling
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Date: 8/6/2014 10:51:00 PM
THANK YOU FOR THE SECOND REPLY
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Therese Bacha
Date: 9/6/2014 11:47:00 PM
Hello PD, your picture smiles to me, I love it. You are welcome my dear. I am trying to come back gradually, hope to start reviewing your amazing poems. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 7/23/2014 5:16:00 PM
Therese :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/31/2014 9:32:00 PM
You my dearest pretty woman, is always forgiven, I know how busy you are, but you always find the time, to pass by. Hope to see u soon in one of your contests. Unfortunately I am having some problems with my eyes, but feeling a little better. Stay beautiful young lady. Bye. Hugs Terry xoxo
Date: 7/17/2014 10:26:00 PM
Tremendous write Therese! loved the read ,, congrats on big win!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/17/2014 10:43:00 PM
Hello to you Dr. Thank you so much for this heartfelt review, I am so happy you enjoyed reading my poem. Bless you Terry .
Date: 7/17/2014 6:21:00 PM
Thank you, Therese, it was nice seeing your name on my contest list.. Linda
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/17/2014 10:45:00 PM
Well I hope soon to be in one of your contests again. Thank you Linda, you are a darling.Hugs Terry xoxo
Date: 7/17/2014 9:09:00 AM
Congrats on your win!!!!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/17/2014 10:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for passing by. I am so happy you enjoyed reading my poem. Terry xo
Date: 7/17/2014 1:24:00 AM
Hi Terry, how are you? Love this heartfelt write of yours....David
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/17/2014 10:03:00 AM
Thank you David for passing by, at least you remember me. I have some eye problem, but will try to be back sometimes. Hugs Terry xoxo
Date: 7/16/2014 10:12:00 PM
Congratulations Theresa on your deserved win... I enjoyed this poem immensely... Hugs Verlena
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/17/2014 10:02:00 AM
Thank you do much for passing by, Your encouragement lifts my moral. I am happy you liked reading my poem. Hugs Terry xoxo
Date: 7/16/2014 5:57:00 PM
Therese, Congratulations! Thank you for enjoying my contest, stop by my latest blog "Tanka you, but no tanka you :)" If you'd like, or have time! No Matter, enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/16/2014 11:04:00 PM
Hello pretty woman. Thank you so much of replacing me in your contest. I did appreciate that very much. Love your new picture. I will try and be back gradually, as I was having some trouble with my eyes. Getting older, but better. Thank you so much PD, you were always my rock. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 7/1/2014 12:17:00 PM
sad write Carol,but so true,many people have given their lives for children and when we need them its others that have to fill the gap,wonderful write,eye opener
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Therese Bacha
Date: 7/1/2014 12:21:00 PM
Hi Richard, I am trying to come back, been away for long. Thank you so much young man of your review. I do remember you did like my poems, although I am sad most of the time. See you soon. Hugs Terry xoxo
Date: 6/24/2014 11:45:00 AM
It is sad if one has only a stranger with whom to talk..Enjoyed reading your work..Your work always is emotive and expressive...Sara
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Therese Bacha
Date: 6/24/2014 12:37:00 PM
Hi Sara, thank you so much for passing by. I will email you later to ask about your health. Much love Terry xoxo

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