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Sittin Here Feelin Low

Sittin here feelin low Wishin I didn’t miss you so Tears fallin down my cheek Lips trembling I cannot speak What happened to the love we used to know Why am I missin you so Why did love go away Why did your heart stray Sittin here feelin low Wishin I didn’t miss you so Tears fallin down my cheek Lips trembling I cannot speak I try to get through another day But lonliness just gets in the way Tears fall every time I hear your name Why did you play a cheatin game Sittin here feelin low Wishin I didn’t miss you so Tears fallin down my cheek Lips trembling I cannot speak

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Date: 5/28/2016 1:35:00 PM
Such a simple but splendid piece Brenda, such nice rhyme, really enjoyed it!
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Brenda Martin
Date: 5/28/2016 1:44:00 PM
Gordon thanks for taking the time to read and post on my poem I really do appreciate it very much!
Date: 5/28/2016 8:13:00 AM
Just read your featured poem congrats on many counts, great rhyming, couplets, flow a heartfelt piece. Well done.
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Brenda Martin
Date: 5/28/2016 1:44:00 PM
thanks so much for taking time to read and comment I really appreciate it.
Date: 12/28/2015 8:14:00 PM
You have crafted a most beautiful poem.. Well expressed and rhymed most elegantly... Was such a pleasure to reread this poem.. Just to appreciate the flow of words within.. TQ for sharing such an exquisite write!!!
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Brenda Martin
Date: 12/29/2015 12:31:00 AM
I'm so glad you got so much pleasure from reading my poem thank you for the very wonderful comment

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