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a single swan released from bondage – silent pond inspired by Cyndi MacMillan's poem "haiku---help is appreciated"

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2012 12:38:00 PM

I do like this one..I enjoy seeing Swans but they are on TV..I am wondering though about the exact interpertation of this one..Thanks for the long look at my work "Miles And Miles"..You got quite an insight into my work..I was writing from the danger perspective in that deer are held back by the fencing which prevents their coming onto the interstate..Also, that could save many humans as well..Thanks for going the extra mile..Sara

Ralph Mason
Date: 12/7/2012 12:54:00 PM

I'm glad you liked it Sarah. You can read Cyndi's poem and poem info to help you interpret this one. Always a pleasure reading your poems. So now I've gone miles and miles and extra miles :)

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/18/2012 9:44:00 PM

Whoa! Now here's a write that arouses in me conflicting emotions - I like the idea of the swan being free but I do not fancy a silent pond... Well written Ralph!

Ralph Mason
Date: 11/19/2012 9:10:00 AM

Swans mate for life. Thank you for your kind comments dear Vicky.