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Sing Me a Song

"sing me a song" sing me a song that defines our story whispering such love in all its glory let angelic birds sound high and low recite a dance to last forevermore one that is new like never before alone in union when dangerously near splash sapphire color waters on my soul walking hand in hand in a lustful stroll breathtakingly the world around us fades once there was me once there was you now there is us with love that is true sing me a song that defines our story SkyWatcher 07-25-23

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/26/2023 7:33:00 PM

It would be a Hit Parade #1! Your poem had a nice rhythm to it, Lisa. An interesting rhyme scheme. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/27/2023 4:03:00 AM

Good Morning Bill. Hi. Thank you ever so much for mentioning the rhyme. I more often than not refrain from rhyming because I truly believe others execute that element better than I. I enjoy it in works of others but not in mine but from time to time I sneak it in (smile). Have a wonderful morning and day. Thank you again Bill. Never do I take you for granted. Blessings always (smile)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/25/2023 3:57:00 PM

Beautifully written :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/26/2023 3:11:00 AM

Good Morning Heidi. Hi. Thank you very much. I am honored. Truly. Have a wonderful morning and day. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. Take Care. (smile)