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Since St Patty's Day

beneath the skies of blue i once believed in you- and ‘til the day you died, o, please know how i tried for you and i became a lasting game of blame, but since St. Patty’s Day…. my life in disarray ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *St. Patty's Day is the worst day of the year for me* 3.22.20 Alexandrine - Modified Poetry Contest Sponsor, Dear Heart

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Date: 5/4/2020 2:26:00 PM
We all have troubles with our lot of siblings but we love them...so love them. A difficult time this St. Patty’s Day, for you. xx
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Date: 3/28/2020 4:58:00 PM
Really nicely done in this form, Lu Loo. How is your business doing? It's so good to see this one and wish you a congratulations on your win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:55:00 PM
I started a website- www.lusworkshop.com if you want to check it out! thank you :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:54:00 PM
thank you! I will message you on FB :)
Date: 3/26/2020 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Death is always hard. Holidays make it ten times worse. I have had it a few times in my life. So Very Sorry.............
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:53:00 PM
thank you Paula, that was sweet. :)
Date: 3/26/2020 10:03:00 AM
Lu, congratulations on your win in my contest, your poem truly touched my heart _Constance
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:53:00 PM
thank you sweet Dear Heart, I am honored and hope you are good! :)
Date: 3/26/2020 2:34:00 AM
A touching poem, congrats on your win! Pleased to see you back!
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:53:00 PM
thank you dear Krish…:)
Date: 3/26/2020 2:16:00 AM
This is sad Luloo. It is always more difficult to lose someone on a holiday. My mother died on good friday on April Fool's day. She was a bible scholar so how can I ever forget. Congratulations on your first place win my friend. xxoo
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:52:00 PM
thank you sweet Connie :) I will be emailing you soon...hopefully today :)
Date: 3/25/2020 10:51:00 PM
Laura, great poem and a big congratulations on your win in Dear Heart’s Alexamdrine contest-. Hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:52:00 PM
thank you Sweet Eve, hugs :)
Date: 3/25/2020 3:42:00 PM
Hugs again, this time with congrats for your beauty in words, my friend ~ John
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:52:00 PM
thank you again! :)
Date: 3/22/2020 10:44:00 PM
Lu Loo, your words are the trek poles that help me climb my own mountains, knowing the mountains you have climbed and returned from to encourage others that they can make it too. Hugs to you, friend ~ John
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:52:00 PM
many thanks once more, you are sweet :)
Date: 3/22/2020 4:45:00 PM
Superb. Best of luck in Constance's contest. So sorry for your loss, Luloo:-( So glad you've decided to stay, my dear friend...
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:52:00 PM
thank you dear Edward, thanks for stopping by! :)
Date: 3/22/2020 3:53:00 PM
I remember you writing other times about losing your sister, such sadness, so sorry...
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:51:00 PM
thank you dear man, appreciate it :)
Date: 3/22/2020 3:12:00 PM
aw Lu Loo I guess this is to with your sister's death. I am just so glad to see you back on the site you have been missed:-( hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:51:00 PM
thank you sweet Jan! :)

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