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Silver Hue

I've tried the moon titled in air Above a hazy tree-and-farmhouse cluster As you might try a jewel in your hair She sat quietly deaf to the river Shadows line along the old rocking chair Rippling chords and running deep Hidden in the darkness and shiver Fiddling crickets with a thunderous clatter I push forward these bones of stone Amongst a small opening and unfold toward home ***** I've tried the moon titled in air Above a hazy tree-and-farmhouse cluster As you might try a jewel in your hair. (Robert Frost) For the Homage contest

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Date: 6/4/2015 10:44:00 AM
What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.
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Date: 8/14/2013 12:12:00 PM
WELL WRITTEN, LAURA, THANK FOR SHARING AND ALSO FOR READING AND COMMENTING ON MY POEM, ALL THE BEST, PLEASE KEEP IN TOUCH
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Date: 8/13/2013 4:43:00 PM
Very well written poem, Laura! I wish you good luck with all of your poetry! And, thank you for reading my poem "Autumn's Breath" and for the nice comments. It really means a lot!
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Date: 8/13/2013 12:30:00 PM
- This i sooo good Laura - Luck in contest, hope you win!! . All the best to you! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 8/13/2013 1:12:00 PM
Thanks Anne!
Date: 8/12/2013 8:35:00 AM
What a strong inspiration. The emotional imagery hit me hard. Excellent job!
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 8/13/2013 1:13:00 PM
Thanks Drake!
Date: 8/10/2013 7:34:00 AM
Laura, this is a lovely poem, I love where you took this theme, best of luck in the contest. Constance
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 8/13/2013 1:12:00 PM
Hi Constance I've missed reading your work thanks for the support!
Date: 8/10/2013 6:56:00 AM
I am sure this will do well, should I congratulate you now?
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 8/13/2013 1:13:00 PM
Aw Richard thanks that means much coming from you!