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Silk Wading

Silk wading thru wistfully warm sea waters, my dreamy fingers have lingered to potter with ocean surface, sun sparkled glitters. My poetic pieces have gone full twitter in charmed waters of crystal-clear rarity where I felt God's love soothe life's severity. Slowly easing into ocean powered waves, my playful moods have seriously caved from forceful, salt stinging, brutal wave smacks. My body has ached sea bruised, blue and black, and my inner desires have wished only to hide from future seas that might bring painful tides. Now, reaching the end planks on my journey's pier and viewing my twilight's approach so clear, it's past sunshine glitters that most sustain these concluding sea views for my earthly gain; It was not all of my hits from waves that bruised, but all my silk wading that filled my heart enthused. September 18, 2019

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Date: 12/16/2019 11:21:00 AM
Your poetry is so outstanding. I see you haven't lost your touch. Loved it. - Mike
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Date: 12/15/2019 2:42:00 PM
So glad this got a win from Brian. It's SO deserving. Love ya, my friend.
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Date: 9/25/2019 6:22:00 PM
I see Vijay faved this one and as I read it, I too was seeing it as one of your best. I love the imagery in this, Caycay!! Did this contest get judged yet? It deserves a Win!
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Date: 9/19/2019 7:31:00 AM
So heart felt and wonderful dialogue on ups and downs of life..many can relate to the passion of your content..which you illustrated in splendid images, CayCay. I am saving this in my FAVEs.
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Date: 9/18/2019 10:31:00 PM
How beautiful. Really great imagery here. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/18/2019 7:36:00 PM
The last line is classy and a classic, Cay Cay.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/18/2019 7:42:00 PM
Thank you, classy lady! CayCay
Date: 9/18/2019 7:34:00 PM
what a gorgeous poem you have penned this evening my friend...fingers linger to potter ocean's surfaces...wow...just love that line...the whole poem shines with beauty....good luck in the contest :) hugs
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/18/2019 7:44:00 PM
Hey, sweetie - thank you for the enthusiastic comments you 'sailed my way' - uh oh, I'm getting corny so forgive me. I've read a handful of ocean themed poems tonight, right after I posted mine. Be blessed ... CayCay
Date: 9/18/2019 7:08:00 PM
This is simply beautiful - I love it. I hope it is a winner. Blessings
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/18/2019 7:15:00 PM
That you, sweet Regina - I enjoyed 'hearing' your words and value them. Blessings ... CayCay

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