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Silhouettes In Moonlight

While dreaming in the loft above I am haunted by a long lost love. The gilded leaves of Autumn sigh just as they did when we said goodbye. On a passing cloud there floats a dream, it's heart shape showing what it means. Silhouettes in moonlight you and I, reunited at last, we both cry. The soft song of a summer breeze enwraps as true love sets us free. Hold me close my darling dear, you may disappear again I fear. How I have longed for your embrace, to be held again and encased in strong arms and pounding heart. Never again we two shall part. 18/09/2018

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Date: 9/27/2018 12:37:00 AM
Brilliantly done...
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/27/2018 1:49:00 AM
PASHANG!! Good morning. Lovely to see you. I take a bow in all modesty. Thank you.
Date: 9/22/2018 1:48:00 AM
A lovely piece, Jean, well woven. Well done! Viv x
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/27/2018 1:51:00 AM
Thank you Viv. Mad over here this week with all the Xmas babies coming to fruition. Hope all is good with you.
Date: 9/20/2018 12:51:00 AM
Very effective use of all the verses, they flow seamlessly, congratulations on your win!
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/20/2018 1:20:00 AM
Enormous help from the contest sponsor Joseph, Michelle. His inspiration also flowed. Thank you for stopping by to comment.
Date: 9/19/2018 7:20:00 PM
Sometimes we just don't want an embrace to last for a long time..Congrats on your win Jean..
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/20/2018 1:18:00 AM
I'm so pleased Joseph. Thank you for the placement.
Date: 9/18/2018 6:01:00 PM
such a magnetic write i was drawn to this one, jean.... winning wishes!..huggs
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/18/2018 6:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette. Lovely to see you.
Date: 9/18/2018 7:48:00 AM
Very well done Jean..you incorporated all phrases in such a short poem..best wishes for a win.
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/18/2018 8:04:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. I have made some minor adjustments to comply with the minimum amount of lines. Oops!

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