Get Your Premium Membership

Silent Fight

I keep an eye out, for her to clue in. Open to watching, instead preachy explanation. But months have been lost, to a standard doubled, Because of my member. Of course I question her words, when chaos is pointed, with me flinching. (for Matt's contest was made in 45 seconds the phone rang, which ended it lol)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/15/2010 6:26:00 PM
No honor bestowed is misplaced ... all credit to the poet
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2009 1:16:00 PM
congratulations - this is wonderful.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2009 12:18:00 PM
Johnathon, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2009 7:13:00 AM
Dear Johanathon, congratulations of your well deserved win in matt's contest. Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2009 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations, Johnathon on your win in Matt's contest. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2009 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations, Your very interesting “Write Now” poem is among the winners in Matt’s contest. You did at great job letting your thoughts flow, truly. Keep up the good writing. SMILES… Dane Ann
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2009 4:41:00 AM
Could go away with several interpertations here. Keep writing. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 8/19/2009 12:37:00 PM
this is a great piece and in such a short space of time well done!! thank you for your comments also love stacey
Login to Reply
Date: 8/16/2009 11:02:00 AM
This is amazing, great writing, I really enjoyed this, especially written in such little time. Good luck in the contest! Thanks for your comment on my piece. Blessings ~Michaela~
Login to Reply
Date: 8/16/2009 11:00:00 AM
Very intriguing, Johnathon! I hope it was the woman in question on the phone and that the chaos has ended. You have an incredible description of anxiety here! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 8/16/2009 10:59:00 AM
brilliant,excellent write--charma
Login to Reply
Date: 8/16/2009 8:56:00 AM
very good poem keep up the great work' Robert Ball.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things