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Signs

For days she prayed for a sign, until one night, a constellation shaped like a palm, poured stardust on her lawn. They glittered in the moonlight, making the night unusually beautiful. She didn’t want the day to come. The dark seemed to be romantic for the first time in her life. The day was extremely loud and bright; moments she missed her boyfriend’s dark, mysterious eyes. He was like a walking clear, night sky.

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Date: 2/26/2023 12:18:00 AM
This is very beautiful poetry, I hope you return to post more!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/24/2023 9:05:00 AM
Hi Aysha. Thanks so much! I'll be back! *^_^*
Date: 9/23/2021 2:44:00 PM
Ah, so mysterious and mystical too, just the way I like them. We can see and feel things in the dark, that daylight takes away sometimes. Well written piece dear Teddy. Thank you for sharing :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/24/2023 9:04:00 AM
Indeed the night is filled with enchantment we cannot really fathom.... Thanks so much for enjoying my work, Mystic Rose! *^_^*
Date: 9/23/2021 1:43:00 PM
Teddy, lovely dreamy poem, I enjoyed it very much ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/24/2023 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance! *^_^*
Date: 9/23/2021 4:46:00 AM
Excellent write, Teddy. She saw the sign in romantic night.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/24/2023 9:01:00 AM
Yes, she did... :) Thanks so much for reading and enjoying my work Vijay! ;)

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