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Showdown

It's time for a showdown. I saw him at the hoedown, flirting with Missy Brown. No wonder I have a frown. He behaves like such a clown when he's out on the town. I'll whack him on the crown. That'll bring him back down to Earth with a bang!

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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/8/2018 9:05:00 PM
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Jean, this rhyme makes me cheer, sing, whistle, hoot, and do the happy dance!
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 2:59:00 AM
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Please let me join you Caren. I love dancing.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/7/2018 4:53:00 AM
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Good one. Kai
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/7/2018 7:52:00 AM
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Thank you Kai.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/6/2018 6:21:00 PM
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Ha! I see you had the same thought as I did going with the "own" rhyme!! The first thing that came to my mind was hoedown too!!
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/6/2018 6:57:00 PM
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I know. I thought it a coincidence as well. I had not read your poem and you had not read mine. I'd love to say great minds, but I have a long way to go to match yours Andrea.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/6/2018 9:59:00 AM
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what a fun monorhyme jean!:-) hugs jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/6/2018 10:10:00 AM
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Sometimes they just flow, don't they Jan?
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/4/2018 3:39:00 PM
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Hi Jean, lol that will sort him alright , sore head ,,funny write ::)))Hugs~~~Niall
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/4/2018 4:26:00 PM
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No messing with me Niall.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/2/2018 10:06:00 PM
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You once warned me about Irish girls, Jean. Now I see why. A very fun read:)
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/3/2018 1:15:00 AM
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Morning Daniel. We Irish are a different breed entirely.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/2/2018 9:50:00 PM
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That was fun :) xomo!!
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/3/2018 1:13:00 AM
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I'm glad you took pleasure from it Maureen.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2018 4:36:00 PM
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A fun read..enjoyed the weaving of words in rhymes..best for a win, Jean.
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/2/2018 4:39:00 PM
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Thank you as always Vijay. I appreciate your support.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 4/2/2018 3:31:00 PM
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He's just having a little fun... don't whack him too hard...a little pinch on his cross buns might not be bad...All the best Jean
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/2/2018 4:22:00 PM
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A little pinch you say? OK, after I pull his ears I'll give it a go Arturo.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2018 2:45:00 PM
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- Funny, Jean ... take him by the ears :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/2/2018 3:03:00 PM
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Good idea Sunshine. I'm at the end of my teather.

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