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Should Time Wait

Great plans pile, getting out of stock hopes to slow both hands of the clock. Heavy calculations on the purity of Gold eventually ready for purchase, but already sold. Unknowingly covering too many inches, ripe decisions, suffering various lynches. When overstayed without eating the Apple, the display will be a rotten sample. To success, this will not appertain another sterile dream is certain. Nobody, does this busy world soothes too much comfort makes failure’s ride smooth.

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Date: 5/17/2021 1:56:00 PM
A creative write. Love your line, "too much comfort makes failure’s ride smooth." So very true. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/20/2021 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Paula. I truly appreciate your encouraging words
Date: 6/25/2020 7:16:00 PM
a heavy write....the shape of time we see as a 'linear count' is illusion....the actual shape of time is how reality 'occurs'.... exponential changes.....this way or that …….something I've been reading about.... stan sand
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/20/2021 8:46:00 PM
You cannot be more right. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment
Date: 6/15/2020 5:33:00 PM
Dare I say time is a valuable foe?! Always running out of time! Busy feeding the soul.. satisfying the mind.. fulfilling the heart.. A profound work, Funom! and a great pleasure to read your thoughts into a beautiful poetry! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/16/2020 3:13:00 PM
You are so right Besma Riabi.. thank you so much
Date: 6/15/2020 5:32:00 PM
Thought provoking and skillfully written--with a summary statement at the end, Funom! Janice
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/16/2020 3:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Janice
Date: 6/15/2020 4:36:00 PM
Funom your perspective in your poem is spot on.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/16/2020 3:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Michael Tor
Date: 6/15/2020 3:22:00 PM
the last line summed up everything quite nicely, Funom in a very creative way.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/15/2020 4:28:00 PM
Yes, Andrea.. Thank you for your visit to my page

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