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Shook Up

I think about my past and I hoped that it wouldn't last but... I have changed people, places, and things and still things aren't what they seem looking into my eyes and still wanting to see me hurt just like "Just Cause" so I still sit in a pause motion hiding my emotions took, shook up with little luck or is that still my "Mistaking Identity" still having to show I.D who would want to be me Not even me Suffering in silent with the rage inside me Hiding... Lurking... waiting... for the day I will explode

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/22/2015 12:20:00 PM
"I am glad my writing was clear and understandable. I am glad you stopped pass. I needed some words of encouragement" Skyy
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Date: 8/22/2015 11:57:00 AM
Putting your anger and frustration into writing is one way to let it go so you don't explode. You can't dwell on the past - it is over! Concentrate on the present. Your emotions come out loud and clear in this write! Love, Kim
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