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Shine In Acid Rain

If the moon lights up the darkness Let all scars be healed from pain Let the stars shine in acid rain I want to feel alive again 3rd place When a fourth line helps it to rhyme Sponsor: Silent One

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2018 11:05:00 AM

I like this, Natasha. Pleasure to read one of your poems.

Natasha Turner
Date: 6/16/2018 1:05:00 PM

Thanks Andrea :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2018 9:03:00 PM

Wonderful write, Natasha !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*

Natasha Turner
Date: 6/14/2018 10:53:00 PM

Thanks dear :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/13/2018 1:46:00 PM

A delightful 4 liner with flowing rhymes. Congratulations on a fine podium finish, Natasha! Regards // paul

Natasha Turner
Date: 6/13/2018 3:40:00 PM

Thanks Paul :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/13/2018 7:36:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Natasha :)

Natasha Turner
Date: 6/13/2018 7:38:00 AM

Hugs Heidi xxx

Silent One

Date: 6/13/2018 7:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Natasha Turner
Date: 6/13/2018 7:31:00 AM

I'm so happy and glad you liked it. Thanks and hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2018 7:20:00 AM

- Congratulations on your little rhyme poem, Natasha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Natasha Turner
Date: 6/13/2018 7:31:00 AM

Thanks dear xxx