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Shine Brightly

sleep the stars shine brightly to help guard the night wake the sun shines brightly announcing the day March 8, 2019

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 10/19/2019 3:15:00 PM

Great write and read!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/26/2021 1:24:00 PM

thank you :)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 4/25/2019 8:26:00 PM

A beautiful Lanterne PS. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/25/2019 9:16:00 PM

Thank you, Ann :). -ps

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/25/2019 1:44:00 PM

- Beautifully written, P.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/25/2019 1:47:00 PM

thank you Anne-Lise :) ~ps

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 4/25/2019 12:56:00 AM

Fabulous PS!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/25/2019 8:16:00 AM

Thank you Timothy :) -ps

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/24/2019 10:56:00 AM

Brilliant Lanterns dear, P.S. AWTRY!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/24/2019 11:11:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your kind words! ~ps

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/24/2019 9:57:00 AM

...And He created the Moon and the Stars to guide them by night... Yours is a shining, poetic rendition of the account in Genesis, (even if not intended as such). Bravo, poet! :) gw

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/24/2019 10:27:00 AM

His meticulous design and providence awes and humbles me... Thank you so much for this compliment. ~ps

P.S. Awtry

Date: 4/24/2019 5:29:00 AM

I had to repost this poem from March 8th because I accidentally deleted it at 3 in the morning... The irony!