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Shine Bright

A shimmering glow a pathway to guide you on your way Shine bright A hope, a joy, an envious thought A way from out of a tunnel Shine bright A white glow like an angel from up above you were created Shine bright for the world to see Shine bright

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/25/2014 5:52:00 AM

Hi Tereiti! This introductory poem to Soup shines brightly with a sense of positivity. very enjoyable. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/9/2014 9:20:00 PM

Tereiti,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Tereiti Pohatu
Date: 5/4/2014 4:42:00 AM

thank you for the warm welcome

Skat A

Date: 1/28/2014 6:27:00 AM

Tereiti, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Tereiti Pohatu
Date: 5/4/2014 4:43:00 AM

thanks for the warm welcome skat