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Shell Shock

Duress and death and flies persist but I can't rest, or I won't rise While on I press, relays of mist that graze beside me now and then, make red my dead and distant eyes but raise my listing head again Unhinged, ashamed, yet still servile, I aim and brave men atomize to ginger haze around me, while ghosts and grenades fill the skies...

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Date: 7/4/2018 11:12:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again on your top win sgain with this tragic poem. I stay amazed at your ability of imagery and words.
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Date: 7/4/2018 9:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Lycia. Well done.
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Date: 6/30/2018 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations, Lycia , on your great 1st place win.. Lovely poem Hugs Eve ~`*
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/3/2018 4:01:00 PM
Hi Eve, thank you! xoxo
Date: 6/29/2018 9:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Lycia - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-)
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Lycia Harding
Date: 6/29/2018 11:30:00 PM
Thank you, Gregory! xoxo
Date: 6/29/2018 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of great imagery that fits your theme perfectly. Enjoyed! :)
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:51:00 AM
great poem, I loved it...thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)
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Lycia Harding
Date: 6/29/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for the vote, LuLoo. Fun contest! xoxo
Date: 6/21/2018 5:25:00 AM
Excellent lines Lycia...
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Lycia Harding
Date: 6/21/2018 7:38:00 AM
Hi Si. Thanks, it's about a soldier who's basically gone over the edge. I wrote it for a contest so wish me luck! xoxo
Date: 6/21/2018 12:51:00 AM
bloody good write -V
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Lycia Harding
Date: 6/21/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thank you, Virginia! xoxo
Date: 6/20/2018 11:03:00 PM
Lucia, powerful imagery in your most interesting write!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 6/21/2018 3:52:00 PM
Hi Lyric. Thank you, it's about a soldier who's basically gone over the edge. I wrote it for a contest so wish me luck! xoxo

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