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She Waves Her Wings

Fluttering and flattering for all who see, her brilliance gleams in my cherry blossom tree- Clouds do part when she w a v e s her wings, and stunning luster to the sky she brings. Deep azure with a dark chameleon hue, periwinkle wings s t r e a m i n g hints of baby blue- flipping and flapping ~divine inspiration~ the butterfly...a lovely God-given creation. She sings in tune with melodious sprinkles, and all her stardust s p r e a d s and twinkles- Medallion sunshine follows where she leads as she disperses in my garden daisy seeds. Plants flourish from her s c a t t e r i n g nectar juice, an elixir feeding mother nature; the perfect use- She liberates herself with fortitude from her cocoon in the heat of Summertime, the end of June. For she is eternally luminous (glistening), and I can hear her echo when I'm listening- Clouds do part when she w a v e s her wings... and stunning luster to the sky she brings. October 2, 2019 Writing Challenge, October -Butterfly- Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 10/8/2019 7:22:00 PM
Lu congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem!
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2019 7:38:00 AM
thank you dear lady, i am honored...:)-luloo
Date: 10/6/2019 4:13:00 PM
Beautifully expressed luloo, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/9/2019 7:37:00 AM
thank you lovely lady ;)-luloo
Date: 10/6/2019 12:46:00 PM
congratulations my friend on your top win....beautiful as always :) hugs
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Date: 10/9/2019 7:37:00 AM
thank you sweet Sandy for being you...;)-luloo
Date: 10/6/2019 11:35:00 AM
- Beautifully described, L.L. ... congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2019 4:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the wonderful poem!!
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2019 7:36:00 AM
many thanks lovely Heather :)-luloo
Date: 10/4/2019 1:58:00 AM
I think you just nabbed the number one spot in this contest.
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Date: 10/9/2019 7:35:00 AM
thank you caring Caren. :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2019 9:30:00 AM
Fantabulous write my friend...sure to place high...all the best Lu loo...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/2/2019 10:01:00 AM
thank you so much sweet WW :) kindness prevails in you :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2019 9:24:00 AM
An enchanting piece of poetry that flutters so beautifully before these eyes. Really nice crafted Luloo. This was amazing. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 10/2/2019 10:00:00 AM
thank you dear Chris, that was nice. I didn't expect so many nice comments so quick. My day is made happier :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2019 8:56:00 AM
Between you and Line I am stuck in the mud, beautiful
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/2/2019 10:00:00 AM
thank you dear Bobby, that was sweet :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2019 8:51:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful... I LOVE It... You've expressed the beauty of the butterfly so wonderfully. It's definitely a winner. And this is for sure a fave. Bless you always, sweet friend
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/2/2019 9:59:00 AM
aww thank you dear lady, you are always so kind...:)-luloo

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