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She Wants To Make Herself Heard

she wants to make herself heard but the busy sun has walked his estate tending to matters, some urgent, some free a new dawn, she sings again to remind this bird, her song is sung for all

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/16/2023 3:03:00 PM

I love the metaphor you created here, Clive, comparing she (perhaps a musician or poet) to the bird at dawn. Her song (her word/music) is written for all. Masterfully done. Have a splendid day, Sara

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/16/2023 11:01:00 PM

Yes, it's for anyone who wants their voice to be heard, that acknowledgement of existence and to be treated fairly, all carried metaphorically in the bird singing at dawn. Thanks for reading and your thoughts Sara