She Said

She said.. I'm gonna kiss you in slow motion Maybe take a ride upon your ocean I'd like to pull you gently into me The way salt dances in the sea I'm gonna tease you with my hair Let you touch me here and there Teach me things that I don't know Like rhymed beats, in and out flow Let your tidal waves rush over me Your hurricane, umm.. feel and see This fierce love, my favorite song Lets sail these waters all night long Your fingertips gliding over my skin Makes me want to crash on you again She said.. Let your tidal waves rush over me Your hurricane, umm.. feel and see This fierce love, my favorite song Lets sail these waters all night long Let your tidal waves rush over me Your hurricane, umm.. feel and see This fierce love, my favorite song Lets sail these waters all night long She said.. She said! ~Lyric Man Note: You guys know I'm just a PG kinda guy, but these are things.. She said! (This muse had outside inspiration).

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Dr Virinchi Mudumbai Acharya

Date: 10/9/2018 6:04:00 AM

Passionate expression. Great companionship in comparison that with an ocean.

Tatiana Nde

Date: 7/28/2018 10:29:00 AM

Hmm. Again you amaze me. You are so passionate in the way, you play with those words. Admire the style and sound of it all! Thanks for making my day.

Kabelo David

Date: 7/4/2018 5:38:00 PM

This is supercool, a true poet by nature and I appreciate your work Lyric.Keep on the good work and Inspire not just me but others.

Anil Deo

Date: 7/3/2018 10:09:00 AM

I went backwards ... welcome back from a busy road trip. But JULY seems bare without new posts from LM. What about July 4th? Independence in the RIGHT quantity, amen. Peace/Paz/Pace

Lisle Ryder

Date: 7/3/2018 8:26:00 AM

Plenty of passionate and romantic verses building in your collection Lyric Man. I hope real life is as good!

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 7/1/2018 8:27:00 AM

LM beautiful interesting passionate write. Write on my friend, write those words that need to be heard....bless you for sharing your gift... James

John Sensele

Date: 6/30/2018 11:48:00 AM

Excellent use of couplets in a theme that resonates with all of us as members of the gregarious human family. Great piece, Lyric Man. John, Zambia

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/29/2018 5:51:00 PM

Let me touch you here and there. Your words do my friend. Enjoy your morning cup of hot coffee And forget about Eve she must have taken a bite out of 1 hell of a bitter Lemon or a rotten Apple

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/28/2018 5:51:00 AM

So beautiful!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/27/2018 10:00:00 PM

Excellent composition. I admire.

George Stanworth

Date: 6/27/2018 6:37:00 AM

I love these lyrics. There's some wonderful imagery within it.

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/26/2018 10:40:00 PM

I enjoy the things she said ;) on my way to work and people in the bus might be wondering why I am smiling.. loved it

Anil Deo

Date: 6/26/2018 10:24:00 PM

Living up to your Moniker, LM. The weather report may start sultry, but you are on a roll. Maybe it's that BIG wave thing … thang? Good song Bro

Moon Flower

Date: 6/26/2018 9:52:00 PM

And I love how you leave 'them' in my mind. Well done. LM. ;)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/26/2018 6:55:00 PM

It sounds like she wants to dive deeply in all that love, feel every sensation. Oh my!! This is so sensual and very playful indeed. ~ Maia (Brandy)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/26/2018 3:24:00 PM

Lovely and hot! Subtle sensuality at its best.

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/26/2018 2:29:00 PM

I like it! :)

Chime Justice Ndubuisi

Date: 6/26/2018 12:52:00 PM

Keep writing man, there is fire in your ink! Her words are tempting and tantalizing!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/26/2018 9:46:00 AM

Whew! This one's smokin' hot, Lyric Man. WELL DONE! Janice

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/26/2018 9:28:00 AM

Oh She said many things..:)..Sizzling from the grill..A very sweet poem with ashes of lava spuming hot :)hehe.I wish I could get into writing onceagain just like you did.

Lyric Man
Date: 6/26/2018 12:33:00 PM

You can and you will.. it's all inside of you. You breathe romance. Just breathe!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/26/2018 9:27:00 AM

I am amazed by how quickly you can put together a precious love poem, Lyric Man--romantic, sexy, fun read!

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/26/2018 9:13:00 AM

WoW! Lyric, I found your lyrics to be sensual, passionate, erotic and romantic. I enjoyed it very much from start to finish:-) Alexis

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/26/2018 8:58:00 AM

I have to say, Lyric Man that I also found the words that "she said" to be very sensual and quote evocative !! I really enjoyed it.

Tim Smith

Date: 6/26/2018 8:37:00 AM

Lol... you're like a fine wine, getting better and better with age.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/26/2018 9:11:00 AM

lol Tim:-)it's a good job I can't see if he's going grey or I would be swooning even more lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 6/26/2018 8:08:00 AM

ooh err LM she sure is lighting your fire with these sensual lyrics:-) hugs jan xx