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Complete in itself with a start, heart and end, It explained all in her mind, One sentence she uttered provided her truth, One sentence was all she replied, And there was no retort, no snappy comeback, There was nothing to argue against, Because, her statement, it cut to the bone, The way it was quickly expressed, So he turned and walked, fled from the scene, He had his answer which wasn’t “hello”, She’d stated her thoughts as quick as a flash, In a sentence with a smoothly said “no”.

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Date: 10/23/2019 1:41:00 PM
Hello Lewis Raynes, A man should respect the word No! Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/14/2019 8:49:00 PM
Ha. So good. ;D, Great write my friend! xomo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/15/2019 7:57:00 AM
And grace to he who heeds it. x
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 10/14/2019 9:26:00 PM
Every man has heard this reply, suffered this sentence x cheers Mo
Date: 10/14/2019 7:54:00 PM
Ouch. Well penned, Lewis.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 10/14/2019 8:08:00 PM
Thanks Line, a quick short one word dramatic sentence.

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