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I could see their daughter next door across the spare green land, cutting herbs from the garden. Her hair, dyed brown, hanging in rivulets, jumped in time, to her taut breasts, like hungry soldiers at a feast. And I remembered when I was eighteen, what the world was like.

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Date: 7/28/2015 10:55:00 PM
Yes, Peter, at eighteen, as males our focus was a little one-tracked - Looking back I think our days were spent hunting, evaluating, flattering, conquering, dumping, escaping.... now I fret about my shed being untidy. A nice, wistful elegy, Peter, nice one. Regards, Viv
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