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Shattered Sky

The Star ignites the lonely sky placidity of the moon is broken tears like raindrops falling from my eyes. words are no longer heard. Distance delays and destroys ... ... but your presence is still felt amidst the gloomy night. Hurt my heart and take my life. My living beauty will haunt you in your formidable grey years, till we meet in the graveyard... .... .Redfiery copyright 2011.

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Date: 3/12/2016 10:00:00 AM
I read a great quote a while back about how it takes somebody of special heart to create something beautiful out of such sadness, you reaffirm that belief again here.
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Date: 8/13/2013 7:41:00 AM
Woow this one made the hair stand up on the back of my neck.
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Red Fiery
Date: 8/13/2013 8:33:00 AM
Glad that u liked it Richard...:)
Date: 1/14/2012 7:02:00 PM
Beautiful poem on lost love.Nice use of metaphors.
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Date: 1/11/2012 9:10:00 AM
Powerful stuff here !! Enjoyed !!
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Date: 1/8/2012 11:19:00 PM
Interesting parallel on life/love and the sky. It reminds me of an amazing meteor shower I saw the other night. Please continue to share the works.
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Date: 1/8/2012 8:19:00 AM
WOW! Nuff said! X
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Date: 1/7/2012 6:13:00 AM
You have so much talent and skill that this page can barely hold it.. Im so impressed by your creativity....mmmm maybe a collab in our future???...oxo Michael
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/10/2016 1:17:00 AM
hey michael...! I miss ur presence here,...
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/10/2016 1:17:00 AM
is the offer still valid ?
Date: 1/6/2012 8:43:00 PM
your words are powerfull,,,wow,,,kicking it hard,,girl....
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