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Shards

you glance back at what you created the tower taller and nearer it shines in the sun and glows in the dark it’s where the fire began with a spark you whistle a tune and some come running smiling their smiles and dancing to your tune but I do neither and turn my back picking up speed and tightening the slack you call for me, but I can’t hear a white noise hums inside my head what was true and built to last shatters like many shards of glass

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/10/2011 12:37:00 PM
Dang. Thee Most INTESIVE READ IN A LONG. LONG WHILE. excellent, I have a poem called "fairytale Prison" with the mention of shards but nowhere compares to your usage in my eyes. THANK YOU for sharing, Lucinda re: Journey
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