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Shadows of Life

I am but a shadow passing through life Substance wanes wandering over barren land The inner essence twists in strife Flickering light casts its familiar glow As I cease to exist and meld within the sand Slipping deeper into the darkness below 2014-April 22

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Daver Austin

Date: 6/9/2014 2:56:00 PM

Some have it good, others not. Good stuff. Congrats on the selection. daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 7:39:00 AM

Sandy, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2014 6:35:00 AM

A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, Sandy

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/3/2014 11:21:00 AM

Good writing, Sandy. Keep them coming.

Shaista Aziz

Date: 6/3/2014 5:30:00 AM

Great bird!a true one dear.best wishes-shaista:)

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/3/2014 2:21:00 AM

Very nice!!... Arlene

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2014 3:01:00 PM

I will keep an eye out, Sandy :) It's the new poets that keep this site going.... :) Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2014 1:59:00 PM

Hi Sandy, I'm stopping by again, to check if you have another poem... hope to see a new one from you again..>Linda<

Sandy Bird
Date: 5/29/2014 2:52:00 PM

Hi Linda, thanks for your interest - I have been busy writing and reading, and will be posting soon :)

Skat A

Date: 5/28/2014 6:50:00 PM

amazing how you describe your passage through life. Epic twist. Love it! SKAT

Keith Robson

Date: 5/28/2014 4:38:00 AM

Lovely poem of the psyche Sandy, beautifully expressed in so few words...Keith.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2014 7:30:00 PM

Hello Sandy, this is deep... It reminds me of a candle burning until dim and gone goes the shadow... Enjoyed the fallen soul you display here... love Linda

Vishal Kumar

Date: 5/27/2014 4:17:00 PM

great tone

Carol Eastman

Date: 5/27/2014 10:06:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup... Dark and heavy but well written. Reminds me of years gone by when Beatniks wrote such poetry... They are now long gone, but their poetry Existentialist leanings continue on...

Diane Christian

Date: 5/27/2014 8:06:00 AM

beautiful said welcome to poetry soup where u will meet lots of new friends to share with

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/27/2014 7:11:00 AM

Says a lot with little words. Well wrote :)