Shadows

As quickly as it consumed us The candle faded from sight Shadows filled the night But, oh, what a delight Feb. 10th, 2018 Saturday pm

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/16/2018 10:56:00 PM

Such a lovely image of the magic of candlelight, enjoyed this!

Therese Bacha

Date: 6/7/2018 4:05:00 PM

Hi Deb, trust me I still remember you, a friend is always a friend. I enjoyed reading your few lines full of positiveness for another tomorrow. Love Terry xoxo

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 4/25/2018 11:57:00 AM

A beautiful, well-articulated piece saying it all in a few words! What a delight! I enjoyed the read! Hugs. Pandita

Niall Fulham

Date: 4/10/2018 5:09:00 PM

Hi Debbie, beautifully penned my friend ::))) Hugs~~Niall

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/26/2018 7:13:00 AM

Good Morning Debbie - This entry is lovely and I enjoyed your moment in time along with the imagery.

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 3/17/2018 9:35:00 AM

Wow, while with the candle we see, but once the dark appears, we feel. Lovely

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/13/2018 7:44:00 PM

Debbie, How lovely!

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/12/2018 11:21:00 PM

Perfect!!