Shadow

Did my shadow change your world Or did it just make you want to stay away Did it change your course in any way. wrote 6/ 12/ 2017 9 pm Monday Was watching a spy movie and a shadow went across the wall. So there ya go :)

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Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/21/2017 9:57:00 PM

Intriguing message in this write. The last line very cleverly scripted. A joy to read.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/5/2017 7:09:00 PM

An interesting write and very suspenseful. I think this could be interpreted deeper in many ways... Very good writing, Debbie. Keep up the great work!

Maria Williams

Date: 6/17/2017 10:03:00 PM

One of those thoughts that involuntarily flit across ones mind at times and don't relate to the situation but if held onto are none the less quite significant. Well captured Debbie...Maria

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2017 9:23:00 PM

Dang, I have clicked on four new poems of yours and I read them all. I am hoping to find one that I somehow missed. let me look a little more. I just really appreciate your taking time to read so many of mine, Debbie.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/16/2017 8:48:00 AM

- Touching ... well written - Lovely weekend, Debbie :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 6/15/2017 4:39:00 AM

Hi Debbie , wow short but packed with a punch :)))hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/14/2017 4:47:00 PM

I suppose we would all like to think we matter. Damned vanity. Really well written, Debbie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2017 3:48:00 PM

I really like this, Debbie. a bit of depth to it in such a short form. sorry I need to rush offline now. but it was great seeing two of your recent poems!

Chris Green

Date: 6/14/2017 7:07:00 AM

Such a sad little piece Debbie. I can feel the loneliness in your words.