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Shadows creep in behind the stars Like a sign to what we are Evil dispersed between the lines Flames of dust we well define My fate is committed by a lock Its key; life begins to mock The blur created its own image Love became its own privilege Haste set out to win and lead Death turned into a remedy Fear trickled down poor time Broken faith on a sturdy spine Caught a glimpse of one tear Became an ocean oh so clear Cheated our way to the end When time was our only friend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/28/2012 7:02:00 PM
Hey Rabab,I just thought I would let you know that your poem here is called a Monorhyme.It's better if you put the proper form in if you want more people to read it.On the left side under Resources you will find forms of poetry.There you can find many different forms of poetry.I'm just letting you know this because I like your poem here and think you might go far if you stick with it.Just trying to be helpful..Nice write!
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Rabab Ahmad
Date: 3/28/2012 7:09:00 PM
Thank you Dan! Appreciate it :) I'm not really good at the whole placing in catergories thing, so thanks once again!

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