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Sevens, Shovels and Spades

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This began as a Japanese form of poetry called, Choka, with 5 and 7 syllables but ended up with 7 syllables each line. Oh well, it is what it is! ;)
Sevens, Shovels, and Spades Dig, dig, dig. Black soil and stone Earth worms wiggle , Decay bones Dig, dig, dig, scatter seeds there Sprouting, searching sun and air Dig, dig, dig, To hide our dead Six feet under, body bed Dig, dig, dig, create new life Born of earth, Feed appetites Dig, dig, dig, Shovel and Spade Flowers grow from planted pain Dig, dig, dig, Work never done Then I see that I'm the one Dig, dig, dig , out of this hole Skin so pale and Icy cold Dig, dig, dig. Deep down inside Reveal secrets graveyards hide.

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Date: 5/19/2024 7:43:00 PM
That happens to me too. A poem becomes what it becomes. Stay creative!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/20/2024 1:35:00 AM
Thanks ill try! Good to know! Take care Kim...xo

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