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Parols wrapped in gold , adorn a church like tiaras forming Starlight Blessings flame lanterns, kindling year's dreams as Manger Babe ushers Christmas! Dr. Ram Mehta's Cingku Poem: 2/3/4/6/2 by nette onclaud 11/11/2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2014 11:04:00 AM

This is wonderful. I just viewed all your winners and love them so much. Thanks for putting me on that list. Congrats for your high score with this one.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/11/2014 5:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Nette. Very beautifully written with so few words.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/11/2014 3:44:00 AM

Congrats on ur winning awesome write Nette! Merry Christmas!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/10/2014 9:19:00 AM

Nette, congratulations on a first place win. Blessings

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/10/2014 9:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win for this beautiful Cinqku, Nette. Your words envoke the blessed and soothing spirit of real Christmas. Hugs, Sanddra

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2014 9:02:00 AM

This is a worthy winner for the festive season, Nette. May you have a very happy Christmas! Congratulations. // paul

Abdul Malik

Date: 12/10/2014 8:15:00 AM

"as Manger Babe ushers Christmas!" is the clincher! Very nicely done. Congrats.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/10/2014 5:45:00 AM

many congrats Nette:-) Hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/10/2014 5:22:00 AM

I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win, nette

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/12/2014 9:12:00 AM

It is Xmas season and I trust you to reel out the best; I am not surprised at this, knowing fully well the stuff you are made of.For sure this is a winner and I will surely come back to congratulate you. Huggs

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/12/2014 2:40:00 AM

Excellent. Very descriptive and expressive write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/12/2014 2:02:00 AM

WOW!!! who else can do this other Nette.. :)! just lovely as you are.. :)! soupmail! miss you hugs.. :D

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/11/2014 8:07:00 PM

I feel the sense of softness, and the true meaning of Christmas. Wow.....lovely!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2014 12:22:00 PM

Very descriptive and expressive..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/11/2014 10:56:00 AM

- A charming poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - Have a nice afternoon - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/11/2014 10:29:00 AM

so beautiful Nette! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Manny Paras

Date: 11/11/2014 10:12:00 AM

Nette, you share the joy of celebrating a special holiday with you lit poem, and in the end the promise of life's cheer from a baby in the manger!

Manny Paras

Date: 11/11/2014 10:12:00 AM

Nette, you share the joy of celebrating a special holiday with you lit poem, and in the end the promise of life's cheer from a baby in the manger!

Ashley Conte

Date: 11/11/2014 9:57:00 AM

A lantern of stars is a holiday's most shining charm.Exceptional poem for the coming season!.. huggs