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September Morning

Humble deepening Brown edging a delayed rush The sunlight shifts calm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/10/2010 5:45:00 PM
Magnificent, love the way you bring words to life. I wish I had written this wonderful work.
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Date: 8/21/2009 6:18:00 PM
Nice use of imagery in this creative view. I really like the last line. Keep on writing!!! Karen
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Date: 8/18/2009 4:41:00 AM
Great Haiku..we will be there in a few weeks. Seasons do change. Great write.
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Date: 8/17/2009 7:29:00 PM
This is a great write to the beginning of fall. very nice!
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Date: 8/17/2009 2:38:00 PM
well penned,Beautiful September Morning--charma
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Date: 8/17/2009 12:26:00 PM
Soon it will be cool again. Excellent Haiku Laura. Thank you for you recent comments my friend. They are appreciated. Love,Carol
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