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Sense - Lanterne

sense smudging wearing out growing dimmer grasp 6.30.17

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Date: 8/8/2017 6:34:00 PM

Can describe the writing process at times...but you have grasped an intriguing poem here...good work, mf!

Moon Flower
Date: 8/13/2017 11:23:00 AM

Thanks JM.

Date: 8/1/2017 5:48:00 PM

Nicely done, Moon Flower. Let me see if some of your other new poems I have seen yet.

Moon Flower
Date: 8/2/2017 11:56:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Glad to see your kind comments once again. :)

Date: 7/20/2017 5:49:00 AM

lovely... you have not written in such a long time..

Moon Flower
Date: 7/20/2017 11:19:00 PM

Yeah, it's probably the lack of time due to undertakings in real life. Thanks for the kind words, SO!

Date: 6/30/2017 12:26:00 PM

Very cool and one that makes the reader pause and think. Really nice Moon Flower

Moon Flower
Date: 6/30/2017 8:32:00 PM

Thanks again for stopping by and for the kind comment, Chris. :)

Date: 6/30/2017 10:53:00 AM

Wonderful Lanterne Moon Flower

Moon Flower
Date: 6/30/2017 11:01:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words, Joseph. :)