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a red butterfly stirred me from my crimson sheets- kissed my scarlet lips _____________________ March 2, 2016 Poetry/Senryu/in my red dream Copyright Protected, ID 16-763-501-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, United Colours: Red sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:09:00 PM
Broken, CONGRATS on your reddish theme. Luv ~LINDA~
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Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 8:59:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congrats and the luv ~
Date: 3/9/2016 8:52:00 AM
I adore this. A sweet write that you have used red references turn in to a passionate poem. Love the duality. Amazing how so few words can stir ones emotions.
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Date: 3/9/2016 9:38:00 PM
James, so happy you like my red poem, it did turn out kinda sultry, thanks for the amazing !
Date: 3/9/2016 8:02:00 AM
You are one and the only one...so unique..!!!! Amazing senryu !
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Date: 3/9/2016 9:52:00 PM
Red, thanks for visiting with the unique and amazing, two words I love ~
Date: 3/5/2016 11:18:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....
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Date: 3/5/2016 3:52:00 PM
Funom, thanks so much for visiting with the wonderfuls !!!
Date: 3/4/2016 2:00:00 PM
Hi Broken, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. A beautiful Senryu, of peace and serenity. A dream within a dream. A seven and winging its butterfly wings into my faves....Vlad.
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Date: 3/4/2016 2:06:00 PM
Vlad, thanks so much for the lovely comment, the seven and the fav ~
Date: 3/3/2016 10:51:00 PM
Loved the romantic imagery in this great haiku, BW! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/4/2016 12:47:00 AM
Laura, thank you for the great comment and the congrats!!
Date: 3/3/2016 8:18:00 PM
oooh la la. One of the very best I have seen yet on the list. Congrats, Constance.
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Date: 3/4/2016 1:00:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for that great compliment and the congrats !!
Date: 3/3/2016 7:27:00 PM
Love this poem, congratulations in the contest "Red" win, Constance. Hugs dear friend
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Date: 3/4/2016 1:02:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the love, the congratulations and the hugs !!!
Date: 3/3/2016 7:04:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest BW
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Date: 3/4/2016 1:21:00 AM
Nayda, thanks for visiting with the congratulations !
Date: 3/3/2016 6:05:00 PM
congrats broken wings on your win
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Date: 3/4/2016 1:25:00 AM
Stephen thanks for the congrats !
Date: 3/3/2016 5:09:00 PM
BW, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/4/2016 1:40:00 AM
Laura, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and smiles !!
Date: 3/3/2016 12:50:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/3/2016 4:57:00 PM
Sara, thanks for visiting and the compliment ~
Date: 3/3/2016 5:45:00 AM
What a lovely dream, I love the visuals you choose for your work. They always add zest to your poetry,,:), jill
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Date: 3/3/2016 11:05:00 AM
Jill, thanks for visiting with the lovely and the compliment !!
Date: 3/2/2016 8:18:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Date: 3/2/2016 8:39:00 PM
Robert, thank you so much for visiting with the beautiful !
Date: 3/2/2016 6:57:00 PM
love this simple yet engaging and beautiful write Broken Wings. Thanks
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Date: 3/2/2016 7:38:00 PM
Lewis, thanks for visiting my red poem with beautiful !
Date: 3/2/2016 6:34:00 PM
Absolutely....visually and expressively surreal! This captures my artistic senses! Nice...Broken Wing! Write On!
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Date: 3/2/2016 7:46:00 PM
Walter, thanks for visiting with that beautiful comment !