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Second Chance

Here we are again in the center of the desert Don't know how we came to know a second chance drowning in a drought of inspiration thirsty still we both know that we can dance timid and a tiny bit off of balance my hands are shaking, heart is heavy beating I look into the endless sky of your eyes here and now there is no more retreating Sands of time are shifting all around us shards of absence seem to disappear possibilities are promises in the breeze and i'm complete now that you're here You're the water to sate my starving senses The master of mirage, you take me home The desert is not as desolate at it used to be now that I know I am not alone Here are again in a second chance of romance and the sands sing a slow song as we dance

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Date: 6/25/2018 2:27:00 PM
Cas, just saw this was voted POTD a few days back.. not surprised. Love this beautiful piece. Let's stir up some sand!
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Date: 6/20/2018 9:28:00 PM
A second chance is well worth taking Casarah, even if it only has the potential of being half as beautiful as your expressive and lovely lyric. Your imagery and emotions dance with the rhythm of your poetic lines with passionate grace .. Belated congratulations on your wonderful POTD honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:51:00 AM
What a wonderful comment, thank you so much Susan, big hug
Date: 6/20/2018 12:46:00 PM
A pleasure to have you back, Casarah:) Delightful lyrics...and congrats on p.o.t.d. award. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:51:00 AM
Glad to be back! Thanks for reading, hugs x
Date: 6/20/2018 12:36:00 PM
Beautiful lyrics on this song. love phyl
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:49:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 6/20/2018 8:54:00 AM
Big congrats on this bright jewel receiving POTD honors my friend! Truly well deserved recognition of a top class poet! A fav...
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:48:00 AM
Your words make me blush, thank you :)
Date: 6/20/2018 8:43:00 AM
I see this is POTD! As always your words fly! Congrats. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:48:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 6/19/2018 12:12:00 PM
Cas, you still have "it".. honestly, I can't wait to see what you do with "it"
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Date: 6/19/2018 1:43:00 PM
I am looking forward to it :)
Date: 6/19/2018 8:09:00 AM
Love how you did this.. Great analogy... congrats on POTD..
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Date: 6/19/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 6/19/2018 7:18:00 AM
This is beautiful . I am happy I was led to it and also congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 6/19/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thank you !
Date: 6/18/2018 9:09:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD! Well done.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/19/2018 7:00:00 AM
Thank you warren
Date: 6/18/2018 7:03:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD on this excellent write, so well deserved....Maria
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/19/2018 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Maria
Date: 6/18/2018 7:01:00 PM
I am back with congratulations on POTD... Hugs sweet lady
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Date: 6/19/2018 7:00:00 AM
you are sweet, thank you :)
Date: 6/18/2018 4:11:00 PM
I think the return of our dear friend has re ignited your fire and produced a stunning lyric!!! so fab to see you dancing again Cas, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/19/2018 7:00:00 AM
Right, I come back and the muses follow, how weird and thankfully unexpected is that... the destiny of words beg for release and pens are come forth to deliver the messages. lol glad to be back :)
Date: 6/18/2018 11:06:00 AM
Beautiful write Casarah...Congrats on POTD
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Date: 6/19/2018 6:57:00 AM
Thank you Joseph ;)
Date: 6/18/2018 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations Cass on POTD. Sounds like you have found your "oasis". However, I do see you dancing with your muse. (metaphorically speaking) rather clever!
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Date: 6/19/2018 6:56:00 AM
:) thanks, hope the muse keeps dancing with me
Date: 6/18/2018 10:09:00 AM
Congrats on POTD. There are some lovely images in your poem.
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Date: 6/19/2018 6:55:00 AM
Thank you!!
Date: 6/18/2018 9:57:00 AM
I just love this! Your desert analogy sets it apart. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/19/2018 6:55:00 AM
:) thank you very much ;)
Date: 6/18/2018 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, excellent write!!!
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Date: 6/19/2018 6:54:00 AM
Thank you Mike
Date: 6/18/2018 8:05:00 AM
Very pleasing, romantic write Casarah, congrats on POTD.
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Date: 6/19/2018 6:53:00 AM
Thank you Phil ;)
Date: 6/18/2018 8:02:00 AM
Ahh, such a lovely poem this is, I read the whole poem with a smile on my face, such a beautiful were your words, many congratulations on your poem being chosen as POTD, good luck and have a nice day
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/19/2018 6:53:00 AM
your comment made me smile, thank you very much
Date: 6/18/2018 6:08:00 AM
This is a beautiful piece of work, well deserved POTD, Congratulations.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/19/2018 6:52:00 AM
I appreciate that, thank you !
Date: 6/18/2018 4:58:00 AM
Amazing lines.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/19/2018 6:52:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 6/18/2018 4:13:00 AM
lovely poem, second chances are rare so grab them with both hands, many thanks for sharing. Congrats on POTD :) x
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Date: 6/19/2018 6:51:00 AM
very true, thank you tracy
Date: 6/18/2018 3:51:00 AM
- Everyone deserves a second chance, Casarah :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/19/2018 6:50:00 AM
Thank you anne-lise :)
Date: 6/18/2018 1:20:00 AM
Hey, sweetie. Second chances are always sweet...as your poem so aptly shows. Good to read you again. Hugs
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/19/2018 6:50:00 AM
Thank you :) many hugs :)
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