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Seasons' March 1

(American Style Haiku Sequence) raindrop bullets lash cardinal cowers in nest tiny eggs stay dry fragile blossoms wilt under sunshine’s scorching rays baby cardinals fly radiant gems flash on faded garden pathways cardinal red mums cardinal watches bare limbs bowing down to pray in adulation

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Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/21/2015 7:40:00 AM

Stunning haikus!! I especially like the last one.

Cona Adams
Date: 2/21/2015 8:39:00 AM

Thank you much, Monterey, for the visit and for your generous comment. Have a wonderful weekend!

Darren Knight

Date: 2/13/2015 10:38:00 AM

I really enjoyed this poem. It is visually inspiring with razor like wording, no sticky lines that pull your attention away. Flows nicely.

Cona Adams
Date: 2/17/2015 9:39:00 AM

Thank you, Darren. Your generous comment is much appreciated. Have a great week!

Julia Ward

Date: 2/13/2015 9:55:00 AM

You show sharp observation. Best wishes, Alicia

Cona Adams
Date: 2/17/2015 9:40:00 AM

Thanks for the visit Alicia. Always gratified to hear from anyone from poetry soup. Have a great week!

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/12/2015 12:14:00 PM

You did a wonderful job here. I read it several times and it gently came alive for me. Emile.

Cona Adams
Date: 2/17/2015 9:51:00 AM

Thanks so much, Emile, for reading, judging, and taking the time to comment. Much appreciated. All the best to you!