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Came snow flakes onto hands grown arthritic, hands wanting mittens. Flaunting, frigid Mother displaying her wicked winds with a thoughtless ferocity. Only a crackling fire brought a heart lifting in anticipation. for Constance "Let It Snow" contest

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Date: 2/3/2010 11:32:00 AM
What a creative perspective in this poem! So much depth for a concise poem. Leaves the reader with something to ponder. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 10/21/2009 5:29:00 AM
Wonderful Etheree, Sue! I love the beauty of winter but can do without the bitter cold and aches! Great uplifting ending! Good luck in the contest! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/20/2009 9:49:00 AM
Thank you for presenting your wonderful poetry to us today. It was an enjoyable read for me. Thank you Sue. It is so wonderful to see a post from you. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2009 1:46:00 AM
A MASTERPIECE, SUE. A WINNER FOR SURE. LOVE, LAINIE
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Date: 10/19/2009 4:23:00 PM
Interesting snow here. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara
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