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Seasonal Changes

Like a tree in spring we start out as buds yearning to become leaves. In summer we flourish soaking up the sunlight with absorbing passion. . In fall we transform alienating our brothers by position, and color. In winter we equalize mounds withered, and brown at the mercy of the wind.

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Date: 7/23/2014 5:05:00 PM
Hi Kim, :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/9/2014 12:20:00 AM
Kim, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Kim Morrison
Date: 7/9/2014 10:08:00 PM
Thank You Linda!
Date: 4/16/2013 7:16:00 PM
Perfect! What a lovely poem! You sure structure your poems very well. I'm sure I already admired you of that but structure is sometimes important to enhance the read. And the fact that it is set up this way makes the poem all the more sensational and brilliant. Extra kudos and another warm welcome to you. I hope to read more verses from you in the future. Always, Laura
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Kim Morrison
Date: 7/9/2014 10:09:00 PM
I try! Thank You!

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