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a seagull flying above the rolling waves wind beneath its wings… the thought of you keeps me going - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Contest: Bite Size Poem 8 Sponsor: Line Gauthier Posted: 22nd June 2021

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/3/2022 6:28:00 PM

Very nicely penned, Paul. Superb seguay from the seagull to idealized affection. Excellent. Brian

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/14/2021 7:53:00 AM

Paul remember me, missed your comments, thought it was high time 'and above the rolling waves' that I should answer this poem, as your comments 'keep me going'. Warm regards, blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/18/2021 3:25:00 AM

Thank you Jenny :) I have not been around much lately (some family-related health problems). Life is looking brighter. Take care and stay safe my friend. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/31/2021 3:45:00 PM

Lovely Tanka, Paul. I enjoy watching seagulls flying - bring some uplifting thoughts. Your comments on my bio-poem are so inspiring! Best wishes ~ Mala

Paul Callus
Date: 8/18/2021 3:23:00 AM

Thank you, Mala. A pleasure to have you stopping by....and glad you liked my feedback:) Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/28/2021 12:52:00 PM

When I saw this I had to read. I fell asleep for a quick catnap and was woken up by my dream of a flying seagull coming my way, low in the sky. It made me think of my mom. Seems like most things do.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/30/2021 1:16:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Kim. I love it when somebody somehow relates to something which I write! Take care. Warm regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 7/19/2021 7:28:00 AM

Lovely Paul. And the picture is perfect. What a beautiful bird. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 7/20/2021 12:45:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by with such lovely comments, Judy. Best regards // paul

Susan Lawrence

Date: 7/12/2021 7:52:00 AM

I love this Paul..especially the last line. Remembering Jonathan Livingston Seagull. All the best to you, Susan :)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/20/2021 10:45:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Susan. Hope you are keeping well. Best regards // paul

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 7/10/2021 5:26:00 PM

Such a beautiful scene in such few words! Great write!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/20/2021 10:44:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jennifer. Your words are appreciated. Regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 6/28/2021 10:42:00 AM

I love watching seagulls glide so effortlessly over the water. Great job. God Bless, JB

Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/27/2021 11:15:00 AM

Paul, Hold a special place in my memory, the Seagull. Perhaps your Tanka meant to keep us going. -Richard

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/27/2021 5:16:00 AM

How cute!!! Congratulations on your win...

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/24/2021 10:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write and picture. Love It. Wish I was at the beach. Enjoy your win with blessings............

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/23/2021 11:53:00 PM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/21/2021 2:13:00 PM

Thank you for liking...and for the congrats. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/23/2021 12:33:00 PM

- A lovely poem, Paul :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/20/2021 10:39:00 AM

Thank you dear Anne-Lise :) Hope you are now much better. Warm regards and hugs // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/23/2021 10:52:00 AM

Oh, this is beautiful, Paul! I love the uplifting quality in the last two lines and the first three paint a lovely image. Hope you are doing well, my friend. Haven't heard from you for a long time, so I was happy to see you posted a new poem. Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 6/29/2021 3:20:00 PM

I have just seen your email Carolyn; will answer in the morning...off to bed...my eyes half closed! Hugs // paul

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/23/2021 10:56:00 AM

Sent you a regular email on another topic.