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"Where is the sun, where is the moon?" the mirror asks. He sees the silence in the other's gaze— crouched against the wall an empty face where once two small diamonds burned and cut in two who once was whole "Where is the blanket for the cold?" the mirror asks. He swipes a star from far to balance on his outstretched hand it tears a trail of blood through fabric frail and skin so thin below his ear he stitches squares of dark with sparks of warmth to cloak against the night "When will you make me whole?" the mirror asks. He strikes a match to light the star and from his hand small grains bright sand glimmer in the fickle white he spills them on the floor before his empty him "I can't be us" he says with faint apology and buckled knees— while in the other's eyes life fades without a fight *** August 12, 2017 Copyright © Darren White 1st place in contest: The Poet's Shadow Sponsor: Greg Barden

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Date: 10/16/2017 2:26:00 PM
Wow, this poem was excellent. I’m so glad I’ve been able to read this one!
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Darren White
Date: 10/17/2017 2:27:00 AM
Thanks Cody, happy you like it :)
Date: 10/5/2017 9:44:00 PM
A truly stunning pen my friend. A fine win love, congratulations xomo
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Darren White
Date: 10/17/2017 2:27:00 AM
Thanks so much ma mo :)
Date: 10/3/2017 5:49:00 AM
Congrats friend for the first place. Well written pal
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Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:42:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend :)
Date: 8/28/2017 12:28:00 PM
That empty face rolls away with an "Astounding FIRST PLACE" Congratulations , friend
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Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:42:00 AM
Thanks Donna :)
Date: 8/20/2017 7:16:00 PM
Congrats in your most deserved win, Darren!
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Darren White
Date: 8/20/2017 10:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim :)
Date: 8/20/2017 6:51:00 PM
I'm with Tim. Somehow I missed this. Wow! A well-deserved win. Congratulations Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 8/20/2017 10:35:00 PM
Thanks Dean, glad you like this :)
Date: 8/20/2017 11:12:00 AM
How'd I miss this gem? Wow Darren and a big congratulations
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Darren White
Date: 8/20/2017 1:46:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend :)
Date: 8/20/2017 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations Darren :D
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Darren White
Date: 8/20/2017 1:45:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend <3
Date: 8/20/2017 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations This is a winner
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Darren White
Date: 8/20/2017 1:44:00 PM
Patricia thank you :)
Date: 8/19/2017 10:47:00 PM
Amazing creativity! Congrats on the 1st place win! :) Sunita
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Darren White
Date: 8/19/2017 11:45:00 PM
Thank you Sunita :)
Date: 8/19/2017 9:05:00 PM
What can I say, my friend? This is exquisite, and it affected me deeply ... love everything about it, and it is a well-deserved win! Congrats on FIRST PLACE, Darren!! :-)
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Darren White
Date: 8/19/2017 11:45:00 PM
Wow my friend, this is my first trophy ever! I am truly honored, thank you sooooo much!
Date: 8/13/2017 5:15:00 PM
I love this poem Darren. Good luck on the contest! :)
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Darren White
Date: 8/13/2017 10:50:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend :) <3
Date: 8/13/2017 7:06:00 AM
Oh! A strangely sad poem that tugs at my heartstrings, Darren:)
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Darren White
Date: 8/13/2017 10:50:00 PM
It's different, isn't it Jo? :)
Date: 8/12/2017 7:51:00 PM
Darren, this is amazing, and as you can imagine I can sure relate to this!!!! :)
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Darren White
Date: 8/13/2017 2:05:00 AM
Yes, I know you can :) Thanks my friend!
Date: 8/12/2017 9:40:00 AM
Sad and beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
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Darren White
Date: 8/13/2017 2:04:00 AM
Dale, thank you so much

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