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Scented Leaves

Merriment winds dapple bouncing gleeful spots of energetic play when they joy lift her thru childhood perfumed leaves of yesterday. Emotionally puckered steps kick-slipping thru teenage ground arrays wore angst sized woodsy shoes during those years when leaves all smeared gray. A girl who never said good-bye disappeared down in sensual lays when her heart first love sighed awry in love crunched leaves spiced risque. With aches not yet adult strong, she smeared regrets where teared upsets lay - on leaves that shamed her dreams while fresh scents hid their pricks that betray. November 14, 2019

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Date: 6/28/2020 1:34:00 AM
Heartbreak of a naive young woman. The search through the forest of love is so often filled with dead wood. Enjoyed your write CayCay.
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Date: 12/10/2019 6:58:00 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem, well done !
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Date: 12/9/2019 3:06:00 PM
Beautiful, Cay Cay. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/8/2019 1:27:00 PM
I'm back here with my congratulations. WAY TO GO, CAYCAY!!!! Number one!!
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Date: 11/25/2019 3:38:00 PM
A superb view into a young girls innocent heart CayCay. You write so beautifully! I hope you are well. Hugs, Connie xxoo
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Date: 11/17/2019 4:13:00 PM
CayCay, this is a lovely entry for the contest, best of luck... I sent you a soupmail !
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Date: 11/16/2019 8:07:00 PM
a very Caycay-esque poem. i especially enjoyed love crunched leaves spiced risque. And the idea of the leaves changing their quality with the years she lived through. That was deep thinking, Caycay. The ending is super cool. Also the way you formatted it. Kim loves unusual poetry and I am betting this will be a hit in the contest!
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Date: 11/14/2019 9:24:00 PM
Wonderful enlightment. I like how you painted this picture as if it was on a canvas. Well done. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest
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