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Say What

If I say "can you see?" And you answer, "What?" Back to me. My reply then would be "if you can see 'what' and that's what you believe you see?" Then what are you looking at? For what, is not what I see. For I behold my vision, for my vision is me. And 'what' is yours!

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Date: 11/12/2018 2:16:00 PM
Hello White Wolf, My vision is me. Is what i see. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 11/7/2018 6:38:00 AM
What I saw after looking around, Was a fabulous country I had found; Were pleased, Females increased; Results of election made my heart pound.
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Date: 11/5/2018 4:37:00 PM
You say What . I say 7 Brilliantly writing Love it . Class
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Date: 11/4/2018 4:27:00 PM
Such a wonderful write, my friend.. A pleasure to read.. So true, everyone's perception is different.. So profound and thought provoking.. Blessings!!
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Date: 11/4/2018 10:37:00 AM
Hello White Wolf, Your word play here does make for an interesting read. "Say What" is a great title too!! Enjoyed it. Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 10/24/2018 6:52:00 AM
Love your cheeky word play..brilliant
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Date: 10/20/2018 9:13:00 PM
What? What is what is in front of your heart and only you can describe what you see and feel because we all have different insight
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Date: 10/20/2018 8:36:00 AM
wretched humour...
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Date: 10/20/2018 7:10:00 AM
And what we are focusing on, and what we perceive to see is what we do see, and you are so correct in the writing of "for what is not what I see." This is the crux of why some words work for some, but not at all for others. I am jumping back in for another peek, because I know this is so profound I have missed more than I have noticed. This is intense.
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Date: 10/20/2018 5:45:00 AM
thought provoking piece which made me smile White Wolf:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/19/2018 8:51:00 PM
I need a another drink, I will on this one all night!! LOL
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Date: 10/19/2018 8:40:00 PM
What
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2018 8:41:00 PM
Who, I see beauty, inquisitive insight and a pen begging to write

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