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SASH OF TEARS The frigid air suffocates slow the crimson heart: sash of tears... ________________________________ ***#1 Pretty Little Lunes - Poetry Contest Sponsor Name - Andrea Dietrich Olive Eloisa Guillermo 9:50 pm, August 02, 2015

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Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 8/29/2015 10:23:00 AM

I like this the most! Congratz for being a lifetime member here Olive! Proud to be Pinoy!

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2015 12:24:00 PM

Olive, so beautifully written. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

James Inman

Date: 8/19/2015 12:18:00 PM

Gorgeous write, Olive. So sad but so beautiful.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/16/2015 11:06:00 PM

What a wonderful imagery dear Olive! Congrats on big win!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/16/2015 10:30:00 PM

Beautifully written, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2015 8:44:00 PM

Hi Olive, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 8/16/2015 1:39:00 AM

Olive, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/16/2015 3:33:00 AM

thanks much Skat.. =`)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2015 7:29:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/16/2015 3:31:00 AM

thank you so much.. =`)

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/15/2015 7:14:00 AM

Beautifully said and matches the picture so perfectly, glad to see this one on the winners list! Grats

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/1/2015 4:26:00 AM

thanks much Cassie.. =")

Paul Callus

Date: 8/15/2015 5:47:00 AM

Congratulations on yet another podium win, Olive_eloi! ~ Hope you are enjoying your heart-throbbing treat:) Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/1/2015 4:25:00 AM

thank you so much PAul.. as always I try my best to pass a write.. :D!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2015 1:04:00 AM

this picture probably produced the most beautiful of the poems in general, Olive, and that sash of tears was just so incredible to me! Very nicely done! Congrats in my contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/1/2015 4:22:00 AM

thank you so much Andie for seeing my poem a worthy winner.. =')!

Skat A

Date: 8/11/2015 2:27:00 AM

That's deep. ..SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/1/2015 4:21:00 AM

not much Skat.. ;)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/9/2015 7:40:00 PM

This is lovely and quite an emotional haiku, Olive Eloisa. It perfectly matches the accompanying image!... Good luck in the contest!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/1/2015 4:20:00 AM

thank you so much Kelly.. =')

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/4/2015 7:23:00 AM

lovely imagery for this lune, Olive. hugs!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 8:49:00 AM

thanks much Kim and hugs back!!... =')

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2015 5:05:00 PM

Very descriptive lines that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visits to my page.Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 8:48:00 AM

Sara, I'm on and off in Soup because of having not enough time hence when I have I try to go to poets included in my list to read.. =')!!! When I read your poems they soothe me Sara.. and they leave me awed!~Olive hugs!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/3/2015 4:13:00 PM

Love this beautiful haiku (Lune) Olive_eloi. It goes very well with the visual, too. gl in the contest. hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 1:31:00 AM

THanks much PAul, there are two that caught my attentions however the second one I got some hard time forming the words so I settled on this.. hugs back! thanks!