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Sanity

Espresso and billows of cigarette smoke start your life each day, to underwrite and elevate the squeaky neurosis you display. Freud and Prozac and Xanax keep you level but flat, add 60 milligrams of amphetamines to get your motivation back. Some say its “creative style” while others say “you’re very ill” as civilized, certified doctors proclaim: “swallow every pill!” No more “Carpe Diem” nor “beckoning to swim out further,” celebrate you right to cope, with therapeutic fervor. Your fading friends alas, contend: “your brain is now asleep!” Just tweak your dose and animated you will arise and leap! Skies ginger with days ablaze cobalt space, your ability to marvel struggles in a foggy and muddled place. Synapses firing, “Control!” my mind has ordered Norepinephrine reuptake inhibitors…dreams Carl Jung has ordered. Dopamine, Zoloft or Ambien, competition to attend, the imagined dangers that never really end.

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Date: 10/14/2012 12:00:00 PM
Oh, Julie! You are so intelligent. What an impressive poetry collection you've amassed! I certainly shall read more! This one is awesome! love, Polly
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Date: 9/24/2011 11:21:00 AM
Congrats Julie on your featured poem "Sanity". Vince
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Date: 9/21/2011 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Julie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2011 5:51:00 PM
Julie, ha ha ha ha! So cute. Heavens no! Not the disease! The write. But, so true. Thanks. God bless and I'll get around to some of your other work. I just started on this site a couple of weeks ago although signed up months ago. Love to ya! Polly Plafcan(polly P)
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Date: 1/9/2011 9:43:00 AM
Julie, I must say you have written about Depression in a more sophisticated way and it is so true. You take one drug to calm you down or make you sleep and the other to wake you up. Take it from me, therapists are no help at all without the medication. Love you, Polly Plafcan (pollyp)
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Date: 1/3/2011 4:33:00 PM
Wonderful write Julie .. very much expression filled in every line ... sermonizing in poetry as u deal with the issues plaguing the recipient... would be a great entry for Paula's new contest however she does not accept Free Verse for this one .. maybe u could rewrite a bit in a different form to enter the contest as it is quite good ... good luck if u decide to do so.. appreciate your comments on my Temper Tantrum ... my hubby is getting better .. business overload stresses him out ..luv..
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Date: 12/13/2010 12:18:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Julie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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