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Salt Poured From My Eyes

salt poured from my eyes and landed on a petal's face, i lost my motivation to embrace the beauty life holds for me- i have searched for a place; an unknown field of emerald lands peeking through blossomed creation the reasons i am in this situation is because i faltered adrift seasons of divination salt poured from my eyes and nurtured a floret's blade- i lost all the progress i made while the hues of nature began to fade… but i stayed- should've gone far, to distant lands; but i knew where i belonged, safely saved from solitude by soft sands ...devoid disputes of sanctified pursuits... for i am nothing but a wilted weeping woman wearing worn roots salt poured from my eyes and filled a leaflet with joy- how could my pain not destroy such magnificence? my diligence freed my experience and my tears gave a lovely flower significance- lamentation can reside in creation, as does can make a bright day hazy- but today… salt poured from my eyes- and nourished a beautiful daisy _______________________ 29th of January 2020

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Date: 1/30/2020 11:13:00 AM
Lu Loo, Congratulations on YOUR top placement. I love the descriptive phrases and images. Very nice.
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