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Image: Flaming June by Frederic Leighton, 1895

So speak the hidden Sages, Such wondrous stories of mystical places. Should I seek beyond the shadows Sacred spaces and moon-kissed meadows? Silently the dreams come slipping, Softly into my nighttime dripping Songs of the ancient magical Mages.

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Joe Maverick

Date: 2/20/2024 6:04:00 AM

Good flow and message, it hits the spots Chetta '

Chetta Achara
Date: 2/20/2024 6:20:00 AM

Thank you. Thank you for taking the time to read it and appreciating it.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/19/2024 3:28:00 PM

I loved the mystical images you used in creating your Pleiades. I especially liked 'sacred spaces and moon-kissed meadows.' I liked the soft surrealism of the dreams that come dripping. I've always had a fascination with dreams. Faving, hugs, Sara

Chetta Achara
Date: 2/19/2024 3:50:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. This poem was so much fun to write, and finding just the right words is always a challenge.