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Safe In My Memories

I sang with you in depths of dreams. Our song took flight on rosy beams of dawn and over clouds it flew. In depths of dreams, I sang with you. I called for you as dark clouds brewed. In memories, my strength renewed. I drew you near and light shined through. As dark clouds brewed, I called for you. Long, long ago, you sheltered me with music, love and carefree glee. A happy girl in your shadow, you sheltered me long, long ago. Written 6/2/20 Contest - Swap Quatrain Contest Sponsor - Emile Pinet

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/13/2020 9:20:00 AM

A smooth flow of strong yet beautiful emotions. This is heartwarming Rhonda and a fave for me! Congratulations on your win :) Blessings and love!

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/12/2020 1:17:00 AM

Flowing like satin silk...Just lovely! Congratulations on your win!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/12/2020 6:22:00 PM

Thank you, JCB! Blessings, Rhonda xx

John Watt

Date: 7/10/2020 6:59:00 PM

This is lovely, smoothly written, with a peaceful and grateful vibe. I see from your comments that you wrote it thinking of your father, and in that vein, I can relate. Well done Rhonda, and congrats on your high placement ~ John

John Watt
Date: 7/14/2020 12:34:00 AM

Rhonda, my sincere gratitude for sharing about your dad. My dad would have turned 100 last week on July 3rd. We called him the firecracker dad. Many happy memories of summertime with my dad. I am sorry for your loss, but happy for the gain we've both known of having wonderful dads. Hugs ~ John

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/12/2020 6:22:00 PM

Thanks for another wonderful visit, John. I think about my dad everyday, but I always miss him more in the summer. Summer was his favorite season, his birthday is in August, and he died on the first day of summer. Blessings, Rhonda xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/10/2020 1:10:00 PM

Congratulations Rhonda, your poem "Safe In My memories",has placed "Third" in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, I enjoyed reading it, Emile.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/12/2020 6:18:00 PM

Thank you for the placement, Emile. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Blessings, Rhonda xx

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/25/2020 5:56:00 AM

lovingly expressed the love of heart through the beautiful poetic words.......I enjoyed very much

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 9:05:00 PM

Thank you, Mahtab. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Blessings, Rhonda xx

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/24/2020 3:40:00 PM

Such a lovely penned piece Rhonda matches well with the image, two stunning pieces!, Hope all well with you my friend, Blessings, Gordon

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 9:04:00 PM

Thank you for all your kind visits, my friend! Hugs, Rhonda xx

Brian Strand

Date: 6/24/2020 2:54:00 AM

Nostalgia Rhonda,so often a repository of inspired verse.Stay creative

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 9:04:00 PM

Thank you, Brian. Yes, agreed...thinking of my dad when I wrote this one. Blessings, Rhonda xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/23/2020 7:08:00 AM

A true blessing to have found and read this wonderful poem my dear friend. A fav.. God bless.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 9:01:00 PM

Thank you, Robert. I'm honored! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/22/2020 10:24:00 PM

Gosh, this is a beautiful quatrain, sweet poetry, Rhonda! Light as a feather, yet deep as the ocean. Bravo! ~ Gershon

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 9:00:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon. I wrote this one for my dad. He passed away on June 21, 2002. I miss him everyday, but the anniversary of his death is always a sad day especially when it lands on Father's Day. Blessings, Rhonda xx