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Sad Sighs

Over eighty, but still quite spry, he met days with joy in his eyes. He loved to golf and he loved to bowl, both were his fun and fulfilling goals. One day, playing golf with his skilled swing, he scored below par - his favorite thing. He rushed home, happy he had done so well. He grabbed his wall phone, there were friends to tell. He began to dial, but soon lost his smile, his feelings bombed and he stood shocked awhile. Leaning on a wall, he thought of his friends. Sadly, no one to call, every good life ends. Phased and depressed that on this day truth had hurt his old heart this way, he gasped sad sighs as he sunk into a chair and prayed to turn numb or see life done right there. ... CayCay July 10, 2021

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Date: 7/21/2021 11:33:00 AM
Hey CayCay well how about this, back to as it was when I joined and how I always liked it, CayCay and me, we have our silly hats on! Your poem as ever superb - sad but penned with skill. Love and hugs my friend. Jenny.
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Date: 7/20/2021 1:37:00 PM
WoW! CayCay, What a good entry for the contest. I found it to be so sad yet well written. This is something we all face as we get older. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest- Alexis
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Date: 7/18/2021 8:53:00 AM
Wow. That was a bombshell ending, Caycay! Quite a shock for that octogenarian's ticker, to be sure... Nice to see your avatar pop up on the Soup. Light and Joy, Gershon
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Date: 7/15/2021 2:32:00 AM
Nicely written, CayCay, it makes me pause and ponder life. I have been blessed and haven’t lost any close friends yet, but I know that day is coming. It’s good to see you back posting you have been missed. Hugs, John
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Date: 7/13/2021 7:29:00 AM
Aww, this is so sad. I see it with my wife’s parents. They are both in their nineties and most of their friends have moved on. Aging is not for the faint of heart. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/12/2021 9:47:00 AM
A wonderful story/write. I have had 2 friends die in the last few weeks and 1 more with not much time left. It is hard to get older and see people go. Heaven is getting closer with each passing day. Have a blessed day/week..............
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Date: 7/11/2021 9:00:00 PM
Hi CayCay, so glad to see you back, how are you doing? This poem is excellent, the sadness that engulfs him on not having anyone to share his happiness with kills his joy.. well written:)
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Date: 7/11/2021 5:31:00 PM
So Sad. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/11/2021 4:28:00 PM
As we grow older it happens often we see our friends die one by one, that is why we need to cherish what we have , and nurture each friendship, until the end. Thank you for sharing this heart felt poem dear Cay, much love Vie
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Date: 7/11/2021 3:45:00 PM
It is so very sad to get to this stage of having things go well and yet (because of nobody to TELL it to) it is all for naught. Wow, what a fantastic message, Caycay. I need to check and see if Craig mentioned it needing to be free verse or not (sometimes he only wants free verse) but if he is making it OUR choice, I say THIS deserves a win!! A fave for me. I am so glad to see you back here and posting!!! Soupmail for you.
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