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Round the Bend

Across the valley A train whistles its presence Quickly rushing on A deep longing in my soul To see what’s round the next bend 5/26/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/11/2016 7:19:00 PM
I can feel the longing and searching in this one..Very emotive and expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am sorry that it took me so long to return your comment on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/9/2016 11:14:00 PM
:) nice
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Date: 5/31/2016 2:29:00 PM
I do not know anything about Tankas, Barbara...But I recognize clever writing when I see it - Superbly penned! My very best regards...And warmest wishes. :) john P.s An obvious seven.
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Date: 5/27/2016 2:51:00 PM
I'm so glad to see you back again. Full throttle, and just as talented as always!! Hope you are feeling much better, Barbara !! :)
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Date: 5/26/2016 8:43:00 PM
Great work Barbara, best wishes in the contest...
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 5/26/2016 8:51:00 PM
Thank you Charlie, glad to see you stop by.Barbara
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 5/26/2016 8:50:00 PM
Thank you Charlie, I think in another life I was a pioneer...ha! Barbara
Date: 5/26/2016 4:40:00 PM
I liked your poem.
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