Rose Meadow

A fragranced optical illusion, flourishes the unique field of my realm Where no other being has touched, the soft vibrant velvet that adorns each stem Each month, a new delicate bud softly sprouts Well-formed in all its desire Draped from a bridge void of thorns, a cascading blend of sweet-scented petals A Rosarium beauty sublime The backdrop, a sea of spring green satin, that flows through my wardrobe collection Cultured and arranged to perfection 26/04/23

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/23/2023 2:01:00 AM

Lovely write. I enjoyed. God bless you, Love, Gina

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2023 7:20:00 AM

wow, I think Julia will really like this one because it's thinking outside the box. I wish I had seen the blog she wrote before I wrote mine!!

Jay Narain

Date: 4/30/2023 9:52:00 AM

I love this. Nicely [enned. Sure winner.

W J Clarke
Date: 5/1/2023 6:41:00 AM

Thank you very much. Your compliments are very much appreciated :-)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/26/2023 10:43:00 AM

WJ, I can smell the rose fragrance through your perfectly crafted imagery and metaphor. A very original and delightful development of the contest theme. Best wishes for the contest! All the best. Blessings!

W J Clarke
Date: 4/29/2023 9:37:00 AM

Thank you very much Sam for taking the time to read my poem. Your encouraging comments and compliments are very much appreciated and valued :-)