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Romance Day Dreamed

A hasty glance and still my heart leaped up as ever to burst thrills within my breast. If I knew more on the ways of romance, I might not excite like some dizzy pup. Just staring at his house excites love dreams. I walk away from his home in love’s trance, lost in the sweetest fantasy soared flames and love schemes as gleaned in my deep heart streams. I look for him on each sidewalk I pass, in each of our town's retail window frames, in any restaurant where I might sup and I seek four leaf clover’s help in grass. If one day he would turn and notice me, he would see all the ways our souls agree, he would know I am his heart’s appointee and, I know, his heart would burst a ‘whoopee.’
... CayCay February 27, 2010 (written for contest)

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Date: 3/2/2020 9:35:00 PM
Romantic thrills on display, Congrats on your win Cay Cay
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Date: 2/29/2020 3:27:00 PM
Super write CayCay, beautiful romantic lines so delicately poised and echo all that Jehjhifer says too! Blessings always, Gordon
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Date: 2/29/2020 11:32:00 AM
I think whoever it is you are writing about, if he noticed you for just a moment his heart would definately burst a whoopee, and that is not only becuase you are a beautiful woman but because your poems tell us you have a wonderful soul and heart also. A wonderful write. Blessings and hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 2/27/2020 10:41:00 PM
Hasty glance of romance..Beautiful lines.. Searching of love..wonderfully expressed..But is it an old poem?
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Date: 2/27/2020 7:35:00 PM
haha, the whoopee at the end!! And the part about finding him in grass. heehee. (what does that remind you of?) This was so sweet and you thought same as me. You used the "heart leaped up" line, which is so romantic. Gosh, I don't even recall if I put my poem up yet for him. I think I did?? I better check!!
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Date: 2/27/2020 7:33:00 PM
This so cute, CayCay! Positively refreshing! I am sure that the male interest wouldn't be able to resist you for a moment! Yippee! Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 2/27/2020 6:33:00 PM
so glad to see a post from you... a lovely romantic one at that...wonderful penning my friend... best wishes in the contest! hugs
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Date: 2/27/2020 6:00:00 PM
well done CayCay this form was so challenging, love your fun romantic write:-) hugs Jan xx
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